First Reading Notes: Supernatural: A Teton Ghost Story


Ghostly Woods of Mt. Penn By: raistlin306
  1. The author's use of imagery helped me to envision what is exactly happening and added a deeper sense of suspense. Also the description of the traditional clothing worn by both ghosts gives the audience a sense of time period of where they are from confirming the accusation of them being ghost.
  2. The plot of this story was well written in regards to the lesson of the story. When the author used the sentence, "He tore a hole in his blanket large enough to peep through", it added an element of surprise and made me feel as though I am the one looking through the hole.The fall of the story was smooth with small waves of tension with the fight between the to male characters, and gave an intense setting for the ending.
  3. However the ending of the story felt short and quick. I did not understand the switch in ghost characters at the end. I was hoping to read more about the woman that had came to him the night previously. So personally, I will try not to leave introduced characters on a cliff. 
Story Source Myths and Legends of the Great Plains by Katharine Berry Judson (1913).

Comments

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

The Introduction of Me!! 

Image
Pomsky  By Kaelin Tully  Hi guys, I’m Crystel Fields! I am from Tulsa, Oklahoma and currently a super-senior (last year…woo!) majoring in Microbiology. I know what you are wondering...“Whoa, are you Pre -Med or something?”, yes I am! I chose my major not only because of it having a vast majority of the classes need to apply to medical school, but because I truly find it interesting. I love microscopic work and being able to identify what a certain bacterium is. Furthermore, I also really enjoy having the ability to work through and diagnose patients with various conditions like in a class I am currently taking called Medical Microbiology. I hope to go on to medical school within a year to become a surgeon, not sure on specific practice yet. Anyways, enough about school ha-ha, in my free time I like to do a little of everything: hangout with friends, read, craft, and of course attend OU football games! My time with friends could be spent doing anything from just staying inside
Read more

Comment Wall

Image
Text From the Friar to Romeo The story of Romeo and Juliet has been passed down through centuries. Everyone knows the tragic fate for the two star-crosses lovers but what would happen if they were in present times?....Live or die? In my storybook I am challenging the classic story and giving it a spin! Here it is, do hope you enjoy! ..... Defying the Stars
Read more

Week 7 Story: A Woman Who's Shape Was Stolen

Image
Lion Attack There were a group of women whom seeked out roots, herbs, and other wild food. On day, on a trip home they became hungry and decided to eat something from the fields. They noticed that a woman's herbs were particularly good while all of the others' were not. The woman, who had picked all the delicious herbs and food, over heard the other women talking about her. They made her throw away her wonderful herbs which really saddened her. She decided that she wasn't going to listen to them and ran into the woods where she came upon a hare. "Give me some water that I may drink", she requested of the hare. The hare responded that he had borrowed the cup from his uncle lion and she could not drink from it. Once again she asked only to be met with the same reply. At this point she was pretty frustrated and thought what kind of hare has an uncle lion. Therefore, she snatched the cup away and teased the little rabbit claiming how she would not be scare
Read more